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Editing: August
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Editing: August

I’m fine with making all those changes. They’re coming along very well. But they all involve adding to the text. The book was already too long. I’m going to have to cut again (it went through a particularly brutal cut a year and a half ago), and that’s going to be terribly difficult.

Oh, well, difficult is what authors do.

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Editing: The Man Terror Club
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Editing: The Man Terror Club

I talked with one of my editors this week. She’s just finishing a manuscript evaluation of my third novel, The Man Terror Club. She wanted to discuss her general impressions with me and ask some questions in preparation for finalizing her written feedback. Some of our talk was about how long I’d lived in Japan (twenty-five years) and how long ago I wrote the novel (fifteen years), but then we got into the whole question of why I was writing a story about a bunch of Japanese women who’ve been abused, when I am neither Japanese nor a woman. She didn’t go as far as asking what right I have to tell that story, but she made it clear that others certainly would. She said publishing the novel could easily end my career and told me in no uncertain terms that I would be crucified. That was the word she used: crucified.

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Editing: Taking criticism
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Editing: Taking criticism

What do I do when the editor’s simply wrong? Ignore her? Even better is to understand why she said it. The proposed change may be bonkers, but that doesn’t mean there’s no problem to deal with.

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Editing: Does my editor glimpse talent, or only bugaboos?
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Editing: Does my editor glimpse talent, or only bugaboos?

What does the editor end up seeing when they edit my novel? I really like the Betsy Lerner quote that introduced this blog post. I believe it’s true that the editor, in seeing something rougher than the reader sees, gets insight into the writer and their foibles that the reader, thankfully, never encounters. Hopefully, my editors are also getting glimpses of talent.

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Voice
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Voice

I began voicing my third novel. With eleven first-person narrators, it’s a daunting task.

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Owning it
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Owning it

After careful consideration of the feedback’s suggested alternatives, I found many of my original words were exactly what I wanted to say.

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