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Editing: Vision More Glorious
If it sounds like the true mission here is not to get an edit so much as find a developmental editor I trust, you’d be exactly right.
Editing: August
I’m fine with making all those changes. They’re coming along very well. But they all involve adding to the text. The book was already too long. I’m going to have to cut again (it went through a particularly brutal cut a year and a half ago), and that’s going to be terribly difficult.
Oh, well, difficult is what authors do.
Editing: The Man Terror Club
I talked with one of my editors this week. She’s just finishing a manuscript evaluation of my third novel, The Man Terror Club. She wanted to discuss her general impressions with me and ask some questions in preparation for finalizing her written feedback. Some of our talk was about how long I’d lived in Japan (twenty-five years) and how long ago I wrote the novel (fifteen years), but then we got into the whole question of why I was writing a story about a bunch of Japanese women who’ve been abused, when I am neither Japanese nor a woman. She didn’t go as far as asking what right I have to tell that story, but she made it clear that others certainly would. She said publishing the novel could easily end my career and told me in no uncertain terms that I would be crucified. That was the word she used: crucified.
Editing: Taking criticism
What do I do when the editor’s simply wrong? Ignore her? Even better is to understand why she said it. The proposed change may be bonkers, but that doesn’t mean there’s no problem to deal with.
Editing: Does my editor glimpse talent, or only bugaboos?
What does the editor end up seeing when they edit my novel? I really like the Betsy Lerner quote that introduced this blog post. I believe it’s true that the editor, in seeing something rougher than the reader sees, gets insight into the writer and their foibles that the reader, thankfully, never encounters. Hopefully, my editors are also getting glimpses of talent.
Editing: Under Shōko's Bed III
I thought I sent Tricia Callahan a clean manuscript, but it turned out I had not learned the meaning of thorough.
The Chicago Manual of Style
Too often websites either disagreed or offered no helpful guidelines and I was having to decide on my own what grammar and punctuation rules to use. In addition, the sites didn’t cover many of the fine points, forcing me to make up too much. I needed a comprehensive style guide. So I adopted The Chicago Manual of Style.
A hermit's life
COVID-19 has rendered me a hermit. But the editor, cover artist, book designer, and proofreader I need are likely hermits too. Hermits unite!
Editing: Neyuki II
I’m trying to write a whole new opening chapter. But bucolic life in rural Japan does not capture the imagination and refuse to let go. It doesn’t turn pages.
Website: 2nd anniversary
I now have seven complete novels in my bookshelf. I am far behind on publishing. And what will I write next?
Writing software: One year with ProWritingAid
ProWritingAid will help keep mistakes and clumsy wording from getting in the way of your writing. It will focus you on finding better ways to say things, and anyone can use such a push.
Three more novels
I’ve been editing three more novels. I hope to introduce them here within the next few months.
Voice
I began voicing my third novel. With eleven first-person narrators, it’s a daunting task.
Owning it
After careful consideration of the feedback’s suggested alternatives, I found many of my original words were exactly what I wanted to say.
One space or two?
I’m changing because I don’t want to be thought of as an old guy, despite my being, in fact, an old guy.