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Editing: Vision More Glorious
If it sounds like the true mission here is not to get an edit so much as find a developmental editor I trust, you’d be exactly right.
Marketing: Neyuki's first hard copies have arrived
The books Steve ordered (both signed) arrived today. These were among the first hard copies I sent out. It feels wonderful to have things moving.
Marketing: Neyuki hit the market today
I love to write. That’s how I want to spend my days. Social media are a necessary distraction.
Editing: August
I’m fine with making all those changes. They’re coming along very well. But they all involve adding to the text. The book was already too long. I’m going to have to cut again (it went through a particularly brutal cut a year and a half ago), and that’s going to be terribly difficult.
Oh, well, difficult is what authors do.
Website: Setting up a web store
Unfortunately, setting up your own online store isn’t nearly as easy as you might imagine. In fact, it’s nowhere near as easy as the companies who make the software for it would have you believe. They’ll tell you their software is easily integrated with a long list of complimentary software products. Don’t believe it. It’s a mess—always.
Editing: The Man Terror Club
I talked with one of my editors this week. She’s just finishing a manuscript evaluation of my third novel, The Man Terror Club. She wanted to discuss her general impressions with me and ask some questions in preparation for finalizing her written feedback. Some of our talk was about how long I’d lived in Japan (twenty-five years) and how long ago I wrote the novel (fifteen years), but then we got into the whole question of why I was writing a story about a bunch of Japanese women who’ve been abused, when I am neither Japanese nor a woman. She didn’t go as far as asking what right I have to tell that story, but she made it clear that others certainly would. She said publishing the novel could easily end my career and told me in no uncertain terms that I would be crucified. That was the word she used: crucified.
Editing: Taking criticism
What do I do when the editor’s simply wrong? Ignore her? Even better is to understand why she said it. The proposed change may be bonkers, but that doesn’t mean there’s no problem to deal with.
Editing: Does my editor glimpse talent, or only bugaboos?
What does the editor end up seeing when they edit my novel? I really like the Betsy Lerner quote that introduced this blog post. I believe it’s true that the editor, in seeing something rougher than the reader sees, gets insight into the writer and their foibles that the reader, thankfully, never encounters. Hopefully, my editors are also getting glimpses of talent.
Audiobook: Practicing
I’ve been told for years that I should do narration. I was so busy writing, though, that I never practiced. I remain busy with writing, but I can’t put this off any longer. It’s time to record an audiobook of Under Shōko’s Bed, my first novel, and after that, Neyuki. I would like to use a full cast recording for each, so I would only be reading the dialogue and narration of the male protagonist.
Cover: Neyuki
My cover designer, Laura Duffy, came up with a picture which works perfectly with an idea we both had that fits the story wonderfully. It is a dead hand in the snow. Neyuki is a murder suspense set in the Japanese Alps. A body is hidden in the snow. It’s perfect.
Website: 8th anniversary
I turned sixty-nine today. The website turned eight. The last two years have been much more eventful for me than for the website, and even more so for this blog, which has continued to survive my benign neglect.
The idea: August
I had the idea for August quite a long time ago. (My first notes are from 2012.) It was originally going to be a road trip, the protagonist meeting a new someone chapter by chapter, with each person who helps him having their life changed in some way. Some of that road trip is still in the book, but it morphed into a love story along the way. The root of that idea was there from the very start, as the protagonist was to escape his retirement home and go off in search of his old love. I simply shrank the road trip part and expanded the story of what happens when he finds her.
The idea: Writers on the Storm
This idea came to me a couple of years ago in Japan. I was quite excited by it and immediately went for a walk with my wife to tell her about it. She thought it was great. I couldn’t stop thinking about it. That’s clear from my early notes on the project, which contain whole scenes written out. In fact, this idea was supposed to wait while I finished The Time Well series, but I couldn’t turn it off, so I opened a Scrivener file and started typing. What came out over the course of a year writing on and off was Writers on the Storm. It’s my first try at making humor a significant aspect of a novel, and I’m not sure I really pulled it off. I think the humor got taken over by the plot somewhere around the middle of the book. But I like it. I may try to amp up the humor in the editing process, if that’s possible.
Website: 6th anniversary
Hello from America! Speaking on behalf of my blog, I must admit to another year of inactivity. Speaking for myself as a writer, though, it has been a marvelous year. I completed second drafts of two new novels, tentatively titled Writers on the Storm and August. The first is an attempt at a humorous take on writing, and the second is a somewhat more serious exploration of love in the twilight of life.
UCLA course with Steven Wolfson
I presented ideas for three novels in the class, and my classmates voted overwhelmingly for a novel titled August. For class, I worked on fleshing out some key scenes. I am excited to complete the novel. It’s the story of an eighty-two-year-old man named August Norman who finds out he has ALS. He takes a last desperate shot at making something out of the little bit of life he has left. He breaks out of his nursing home, steals his daughter’s car, and embarks on a cross-country quest to find and win back his college sweetheart, May White. But love in their eighties is no simple affair, as they fight concerted family opposition.
I am now working on August pretty much full time. I love this part of writing, where the details of the story reveal themselves. It’s exciting every day.